“Completing many {Polus} contests, you will seize the crown.”
"Contests: struggles, trials, dangers; crown: wreath, garland.
If you persist in your struggles, after many trials you will succeed. Perseverance through adversity."
At about 3am this morning I finished with the version the appears below. I felt tired, but happy. That version is still just a first draft, but I think Demeter will be pleased once I get it perfected.